Thursday, June 2, 2011

haiku......trance

swirl in bliss
to a mystical merger
with the Divine, immortality!

the pendulum sways
locked gaze, mind
in a hypnotic trance...

dagger drawn, slit
beads of blood glisten
paralysed, fear!

comatose, in a drug-induced
psychedelic trance, even
Death seems sublime!

immersed in musical delights
to a rapturous splendour,
énchantment, enhanced!!



02jun11, 2230hrs

7 comments:

  1. impressed.
    3 in one entry,
    well done.

    :)

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  2. Wonderful haikus, I wrote one of mine on fear too
    I really like the imagery in the second one, something intriguing to me about pendulums

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  3. Is it about fear? for me it sounds like something beyond fear....expression so difficult to word... i like it kutts..

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  4. @ deepak.....thank you so much !
    @ jingle....thanks....just decided to get greedy and post a couple more!
    @ mlm....thanks! pendulums do just that....lock us in a trance!
    @ phoenix...thank you so much! Its like a rabbit gets paralysed with fear when caught in sudden bright lights...that fear is almost trance-like!

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  5. Hey after going thru ur haikus I say it's a pleasure and a must to go thr urs to learn how to nail a haiku!

    I enjoyed my presence here :)

    Smile,
    gowthami.

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  6. dear Gowthami...you are a new visitor to my world...and its super to have you here! thanks for the fulsome compliments...but these are some just humble outpourings! god bless!

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