Sunday, December 9, 2012

Haiku ~ Pain

Recipe of Pain ~


Crush in, numbness
Stir fry raw sorrow,
Voila , pain concocted !

Voila, pain concocted,
Hard to digest, heart ache
Crushing numbness !

20 comments:

  1. Enjoyed the gastro analogy in these. Nice one.

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  2. I think your haiku are great. SO . . . .

    I'm affiliated with a new National Pain organization that is not up on the web yet. (I'm not paid!)
    With permission I would like to send them your Pain Haiku as they are interested in using creative expressions in promos and/or the site itself. However, I need written permission.
    If you give permission send me an e-mail at judithwesterfield@gmail.com with a cut-n-paste of the haiku you are giving permission for and whether you want your name attached or want to remain anonymous.

    Thanks, Judith

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    1. Dear Judith ,

      I am overwhelmed with your compliment. Thank you. And I most certainly would like to help you in any which way I can. I have emailed you.

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    1. Hello there Hazel !

      Thank you. This time I decided to be irreverent with a very serious theme. As also, play with words :) All posts pertaining to this clue, are serious, aren't they?

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  4. Crushing numbness is a good description for pain ~

    Please take out your word verification so commenting is easier ~

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    1. Hi Grace !

      Thank you for your visit, and yes, I'll do away with the word verification, once i figure out how :)

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  5. Very different take... Too good... Poetic to the core!!!

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    1. Thank you, satya !!! Nice to have you visit me :)

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  6. "Pain... so hard to digest..."
    Very aptly put my dearest Prem..
    Even numbness is a state of sensation that we know exists but can not define.. Painful truth..

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    1. Thanks, my dearest Moushumi !!! I look forward to your inputs !!

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  7. Pain concocted emulating the offerings of a chef. Cleverly done Prema!

    Hank

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    1. Thanks a ton, Hank !! Very nice of you to visit !

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  8. a very different take on prompt and very playful with words, crush in numbness to crushing numbness. I enjoyed reading it.

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    1. Thanks, meenakshi !! I did not want to go down the usual route. So, thought of trying something different. Am glad you enjoyed this !!

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    1. Thank you. A pleasure to have you visit :)

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  10. Wow! Who would have thought of pain as cooked up, but so true, indeed it is. Loved it!

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    1. Thanks jolly !! Am truly glad you enjoyed this one.

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