Friday, April 20, 2012

haiku ~ renovation

Rejuvenation, resurgence, renewal
Rebirth.....words galore , mean nothing
What else, but renovation ?


Risen sun, tirelessly
Gives light and life,
Every day, a renovation!

6 comments:

  1. nice thoughts Prema ji..however syllables are amiss here..you need to follow 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 syllable form..I too din't know this when I started..:)

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    1. True....I agree :) thanks for the view ;)

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  2. I like that last line - "Every day, a renovation!"

    Richard

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  3. Everyday is in fact a renovation of the one before. Thanks for this insight, Prema.

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