In the beginning
There was the Word,
And the Word, Divine...
The universe
Infinite nothingness
No beginning, no end...
A new day
A new life
A new beginning...
Life quivers...
The beginning of the end
Death....breath stills...
Tender, shy glances
Unrequited sighs...
Love's a-beginning !!!
Sunday Jan 2,2011...1200hrs
Well thought out series of haikus.. liked it..
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ReplyDelete@madeleine.....welcome to my world...and thank you for your appreciation!
ReplyDeleteDelightful mix of physical and spiritual thoughts!
ReplyDelete@greyscale territory....thanks very much for that wonderful compliment....and its my pleasur to have you visit my world!
ReplyDeleteawesome Haiku poem.
ReplyDeletewell done.
@jingle.....wow...!!! thanks a lot for the compliment. welcome to my world!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem.
ReplyDeleteTeresa
@teresa....good morning and welcome to my world! thank you for your visit and appreciation....its a pleasure!!!
ReplyDeleteVery thoughtful...
ReplyDelete"The universe
Infinite nothingness
No beginning, no end...".....loved this one a lot :)
My Prem..an epitome of love..
ReplyDeleteForgive my distortion of your lovely Haiku which has touched my heart and makes me impatient to say:
In the beginning
There was the word
A-U-M... Divine
The universe
an infinite nothingness
no beginning, no end
Chanting
through a new life
Divine induction
Life quivers
from one beginning, endlessly
to yet another beginning
Tender joyous moments
seeking love Divine
its a beginning..to no end
PREM... Your page looks fabulous...:))
ReplyDelete@moushumi...thank you dearest....the page was designed by my wonderfully artistic daughter...i am a techno-dinosaur!!!
ReplyDeletemoush...you pls start whriting haikus...you write so splendidly...i simply adore your versions....muwaah!!! take a bow my dear!!!
@sumit...thank you for being here.....am glad you liked that one...its my personal fav too!!! :-))))
ReplyDelete...beautiful........
ReplyDeleteThank you deepak! Lovely seeing you here!
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteI'm a new follower.
Marie
bonkersinbarnhart.com
Hey Marie ! Great to see you here and thank you!
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