SELF...
Buried, deep beneath
The many layers of complexities
Lies the real self...
Seek the Divine...
Desire to merge ...
With the One True Self....
Who is the I?
What is the Self?
But an illusion.
LIFE....
Life beckons...
With the sweetness of nectar
Reach out, my friend.
Life beckons...
Out of a parched land...
A tender shoot struggles forth....
Life...is only a breath ...
Exhale, and fade into oblivion...
Death, a new beginning...
Hey you are a great poet. your words are sharper like the shimla cold and hit you in heart. great going prema. Love to read more from you. Frankly you should take up English teaching as your passion. You will be satisfied from all sides.
ReplyDeleteit takes a real artist to compress the many faces of life into lines of three, and words so few, and yet so powerful... its brilliant..
ReplyDeleteseek the divine was my favorite one so far.. :) cheers..
Good ones.. !
ReplyDelete@raghu....thats a great compliment...! and it is truly encouraging to have my better half support my endeavours!!!
ReplyDelete@nishevita....my greatest critic, my fan , my beloved daughter.....love you hugely, and your appreciation humbles me!
@ramesh sood...thank you for your feedback and welcome to my world!!!
Vanakkam- The starting line" of Self buried in " is a TRUTH- beautiful and here the Vedantic explanation of Adi Sankara's Pancha Koshas -
ReplyDelete5 sheaths of our"self" is stated in your Haiku line- with such brevity.
Really happy to see this link-read in.
just keep going-
Thanks & rgds
TR
loved best the last haiku on self!!
ReplyDeleteGood morning TRmama....rombha rombha nandri....it is such a pleasure to receive your appreciation.....and the little nuggets of knowledge that you offer!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear deepak....I await your feedback like nothing else ....please do suggest ways to improve!
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